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In Control’ – Back for Revenge
by
Kawaljit Singh
Non diegetic – happy tune
Establishing shot:
Extreme long shot of the buildings in London and people.
THE HOSTEL
Zoom into the hostel. PULL BACK TO SEE its Dean’s mum in the hostel with her daughter. A MALE NARRATOR, with heavy voice begins …
Non Diegetic sound – Sad tune
NARRATOR (V.O.)
After the death of Dean, Dean’s mum is really upset and now wants to live alone. That’s not the only reason why she wants to live alone but she wants a revenge for her son, bearing in mind she will face consequences; she decided to leave her daughter in the hostel to be brought up well.
SANDRA
Morning sir! , I am here for my daughter as I want her to
to stay here and not with me anymore.
PRINCIPLE
Can I ask you why?
SANDRA
Its non of your damn problem!
SANDRA GETS OFF the chair with anger remembering with what had happened with Dean.
FLASH BACK:
Sandra lying near Dean’s dead body with mournful cry.
CROSS CUT
FADE IN :
THE POLICE OFFICE
POLICE OFFICER
Danny and Sam you’re out now and I expect that you will make sure you are not back here at any point of your life.
SAM
Yh! Whatever!
DANNY
Yes officer I’ll make sure.
CROSS CUT
EXT. OUTSIDE THE POLICE OFFICE – AFTERNOON
Charlie boy waits for Sam to come out.
CHARLIE BOY
Oi! Oi! Taking to you Sam!!
SAM
Yh! What ?
CHARLIE BOY
Are you the reason why Dean’s dead?
SAM
YH! So what you gonna do ?
CHARLIE BOY
Oi! please save me from his mum. She won’t spare me! SHE WANTS TO KILL ME!!!
SAM
Stay with me if you wanna save yourself li’l pussy..
am and Charlie boy walk along the road and plan to rob a shop.
SAM
Oi, waste man!
Charlie boy
Taking to me?
SAM
YH ! DICKHEAD
CHARLIE BOY
WAT ??
SAM
ARE YOU BRAVE ENOUGH TO ROB A SHOP, PUSSY??
CHARLIE BOY
WHY NOT MAN, I’M BRAVE ENOUGH!
SAM
LET’S SEE YOUR HEROICS THEN!!
CROSS CUT
ZOOM IN TIGHT
DANNY’S SHOP
NARRATOR (V.O.)
After coming out of the prison Danny’s now decided to work at his mum’s shop. And wants to live a life with no trouble!
INT. – DANNY’S SHOP – EVENING
Danny is serving his customers on the cashier.
CROSS CUT
EXT. – OUTSIDE DANNY’S SHOP
Sandra decides to go in Danny’s shop and buy some snacks not knowing it’s Danny’s shop.
CROSS CUT
EXT. – NEAR DANNY’S SHOP – EVENING
Charlie boy and Sam target Danny’s shop without knowing it’s Danny’s shop.
CHARLIE BOY
Oi! Sam let’s get the money and let’s spend half of it on drinks tonight!
SAM
Yh! Boy but can you stop thinking about that cause we
haven’t even robbed the shop.
CHARLIE BOY
I know we’ll make it !
SAM
Oi ! Dickhead, listen to me when we go in all you are going to do
is get the money from the cashier and leave the other shit to me !
CHARLIE BOY
Alright! Now let’s go in…
INT. – DANNY’S SHOP
Danny is busy working and Dean’s mum is also present in the shop buying snacks. Charlie boy and Sam walk in the shop and are astonished as they saw Danny working there.
DANNY
Cool bruv! What you up to Sam!
SAM
OH! So now you are becoming a good boy LIKE IT…
but right now I want all the money in your cashier.
DANNY
You! Serious…
SAM
Naa! I’m kidding. What do you think pussy!!!, don’t make me
take my gun out..
DANNY
Naa boy! Lets see what can you do!
Sam takes out his gun and passes to Charlie boy who’s standing right next to Danny.
SAM
Oi! Charlie catch the fucking gun !
CHARLIE BOY
Kool !!
By the time they do this Sandra gets an idea.
SANDRA to herself
I think this is the best situation where I can take my son’s revenge, let’s just try to get the gun and then it’s all over.
Sandra pushes Charlie boy from behind and rapidly picks up the gun.
SANDRA
Charlie, unfortunately it’s your last day in your awful life.
I’M GOING TO KILL YOU!!
CHARLIE BOY
I wasn’t me who killed Dean; it was Sam the guy next to you who bullied him and lead him to death.
SAM
If you got the guts old lady do something or just piss off!
SANDRA
You can just Fuck off, you don’t know what you’ve done, you’ve
killed my son!
TIGHT ON :
Sandra pulls back the trigger of the gun and warns them to admit their crime.
SANDRA
I want you to admit your fucking crime right now! To the police …
SAM
Oi ! lady don’t waste my time and yours! JUST PISS OFF FROM HERE…
ZOOM IN:
The gun in Sandra’s hand
Sandra decides to shoot them, BANG, BOM... and runs away!!
FADE OUT
Sam and Charlie boy lying on the floor with blood all over and 1 MONTH LATER APPEARS ON THE SCREEEN.
END OF SCRIPT
